Nice job!!! I need to say I was a bit put off by your judgement of Jewish Right (not that I disagree) because of what others have said about the history of Jewish persecution.

I loved your story until the end, where you say you support BDS. My question is, why do you support any political group? You're obviously a very independent thinker. What do you believe would happen if BDS was completely successful? Whatever that is, I believe you need to explain it in your story. Otherwise, you're just carrying someone else's flag.

No one really wanted that land before it was built into a prosperous place. So Palestinians are also an issue of the economically disenfranchised all over the Middle East. Others have also commented on that.

I hope you'll take all the comments and do a 2nd story where you address them all. But this one is near perfect for your intended purpose! Thanks!